tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4321718402374465390.post6014418979076757073..comments2023-05-13T03:16:53.799-07:00Comments on Unsweetened T: Carry MeTrinnyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08601769515754485389noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4321718402374465390.post-77783605267594380302020-02-29T07:34:31.312-08:002020-02-29T07:34:31.312-08:00I think this would be even better wtihout the last...I think this would be even better wtihout the last line.<br /><br />End with: I still fling my arms up, I still say, "Carry me". Beginning and ending this one with the same phrase would make it powerful and not giving the balm of affirmation leaves it to possibility and increases the poignancy.<br /><br />And also, can I use this poem in a class that's coming up? I love this poem.Hillspinnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14889495312516909816noreply@blogger.com